Picture 1:
On the first picture, we can see
Snowden, which is a symbol for human rights, or more a fighter for human
rights. Snowden was working for the NSA (The National Security Agency), and the
NSA was secretly spying on almost the whole population in the USA over the
internet or over the phone. Snowden choose to share that the NSA was doing
illegal spying with the world, and the world found out that NSA was breaking
the human rights. The government is trying to catch Snowden, since telling the
world about these secret documents was illegal as well, but many people has
been helping Snowden hide from the U.S government, because they think he did
the right thing by telling it to the world. However, What the NSA and the U.S
government did was a clear violation on the human rights. People should to
things without being watched all the time.
The picture is showing that people, from all over the
world, are supporting Snowden for what he did. On the pitcher, we see people
from Asia that are supporting Snowden, calling him a hero, and saying shame on
the U.S government, for trying to send him to prison. So yeah, the message of
the picture is that all over the world, people are happy for what Snowden did.
The message on this picture is that Snowden is a hero,
and that he is being thanked form all over the world, and the pitcher shows it
fast, because you can see on the people and there writing that they are from
Asia, and they are supporting Snowden, for what he did in the USA. And this
message conveys very fast and effectively.
Picture
2
In the second picture, we see a photo of the
autobiography of Julian Assange. Personally, I have never heard of Julian
Assange, but on the photo of his book, there is a photo of Julian’s face. In
addition, the title of the book in written in front his mouth, which is a hint
that he might never have been allowed to say what he means, which is a
violation on the independence right, which is a human right.
The message of the pictures might be that it is never
too late speak up and say what is on our hart.
To understand this message you might have to think a
lot before you find out what the message is, so I do not think that it is
effectively send a message to the people.
Picture 3 (4)
The last picture is about Human Trafficking. We can
see four types of human trafficking, which is “forced harbour, trafficking
children, sexual trafficking and trafficking of organs that has been removed
without the will of the persons that loses they’re organs. All of these things
are violation on human rights, and is a big problem in the world, although I
believe the most people, including me, does not know a lot about these things.
I believe it is a bigger problem than we think.
I think all of these pitchers are showing us that this
is a big problem, because the pictures are so intense, and you can easily see
that people that is being taken advantage of, is being treated wrong.
I think this message is easy to see, because the photos
are so intense and it is easy to see that it is wrong.
My earlier comments said: Content: Good, I especially like what you have taken down about Snowden because there you explain well what the human right is about.
ReplyDeleteStructure: Paragraphs are well structured - an introduction and a conclusion are missing...
Language: Quite good - notice that people are (fleitalsord krev fleirtal i verb)
In addition, I said that an intro and a conclusion were missing - you have added the latter, but still need an introduction.